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Wednesday, September 3, 2025

"First Comes Marriage… Then Comes Murder" by Donna Mumma

About this book:

  “Vivien’s Bridal Creations Found at Murder Scenes
     Mid-century glam meets murder mayhem in a series of cozy mysteries at Wynton’s Department Store.
     It is 1956 in Levi City, Florida. Vivien Sheffield, renowned bridal gown designer and consultant for Wynton’s Department Store, is facing the greatest challenge of her career. Someone has been killing brides who wore one of her custom gowns in their wedding! Vivien’s fellow employees and close friends—Audrey, Mary Jo, and Gigi—and her assistant Mirette spring into action to save Miss Vivien and the young brides of Levy City before the murderer succeeds at destroying Vivien’s business at Wynton’s. . .and her reputation.”


Series: Book #2 in the “Women of Wynton’s Mystery” series. Review of Book #1 Here!


Spiritual Content- A Scripture is remembered; Some prayers & Thanking God; Some 'H's are capital when referring to God; Mentions of God; Mentions of prayers, praying, & Thanking God; Mentions of churches, church going, a pastor, & Sunday school classes (including for funerals); Mentions of the Ten Commandments (mostly to honor one’s father and mother); A mention of “fixing it” with the Lord so someone knows where she’s going when she dies; A mention of the “pearly gates”; A mention of Vivien’s father telling her that discussing religion or politics was the best way to lose a friend; 
             *Note: Mentions of luck.
 

Negative Content- Minor cussing including: a ‘golly’, an ‘oh my stars’, two ‘ever-loving’s, two ‘good grief’s, two ‘idiot’s, two ‘oh my word’, three ‘dumb’s, four ‘gosh’s, and four ‘stupid’s; Some eye rolling; Finding a murdered body (someone who was ran-over/hit by a car), Someone else seriously injured, & Blood/Bleeding (up to semi-detailed); Seeing grieving families (including mothers for their daughters, up to semi-detailed); Mary Jo tries to encourage her husband through his recovery, but he gives her and their daughters the silent treatment for some time; Mary Jo also tells another character about sometimes playing with the idea of running away to a place where no one wants something from her & the other character encourages her about being a wife and mother; All about & Many mentions of murders, how they happened, the bodies, the weapons, crimes, crime scenes, & the murderer (four murders all where the woman is bludgeoned to death, up to semi-detailed); Many mentions of deaths & grief (including mothers for their daughters who were murdered, up to semi-detailed); Mentions of murders & events from Book #1 (including who the murderer was in that book, stealing, & being locked in jail); Mentions of a death, hit-and-run, someone being hit by a car, someone being hit and attacked, injuries, & blood/bleeding; Mentions of wars & some of the men who fought overseas not wanting to talk about it; Mentions of a robbery, thief, stealing, & prisons/jail time; Mentions of an ill family member (a father; including going to the hospital and coughing up blood); Mentions of Mary Jo’s husband who was in a construction accident and lost his right arm & her having to become the breadwinner of the family (including his bitterness about the situation, negative comments about him from her mother, him being in dark moods, & some others seeing him as a “cripple”); Mentions of cocktails & champagne at parties; Mentions of lies & lying; Mentions of hatred & jealousy (including a sister putting down her sister meanly); Mentions of gossip & rumors; Mentions of hunting & hunting trips; A few mentions of nightclubs; A few mentions of smoking, cigarettes, & cigars; A few mentions of divorces (including Gigi who has been divorced twice); A few mentions of throwing up; A couple mentions of bullies & kids being teased at school; A couple mentions of poker; A mention of a child dying from scarlet fever (a sibling); A mention of con-artists; A mention of vandalism; A mention of someone looking like someone else “just shot their dog”; 
             *Note: Discussions about someone who could have a grudge against wives and marriage (with strong hatred); A comment about a man letting his wife and daughter “wear the pants” in their home; A woman comments about not wanting to give her “best years or her brain to a man” (which is what would happen if she got married, according to her); Gigi has low self-confidence (also called an inferiority complex), compares herself to others, feels as if other clerks look down on her, & negatively comments on her appearance and build (which Audrey tries to help and tells her that she is her own worst enemy); Mary Jo has a strained relationship with her mother due to her husband not working and Mary Jo having to work to provide for their family (she harps on and bashes Mary Jo, *Spoiler* so much so that Mary Jo’s husband gets enough of her being treated that way and wants to get better to show her mother that she’s wrong *End of Spoiler*); Racial comments and observations are made based on the time-period (such as: Black employees being treated rudely or nitpicked at their jobs; How “Coloreds” aren’t allowed in the department store without a note from a white employer and any workers from the store has to go through the back; Seeing Coloreds wait to board the buses until after the white people have gotten on and then having to wait to get off last; Gigi complements a Black girl’s outfit on the bus and another white person makes a disapproving face; Gigi notes that “the rules for no interaction between the races were set in stone” in her city; A side character has difficulty getting to her job at the department store due to a security guard not allowing her in; A group of Black employees are physically forced off of a bus because there wasn’t enough space for the white people that wanted on and didn’t receive a refund from the bus company; Gigi thinks about how most times she never thought about the difference in skin color compared to her Black friend or other Black employees, but when something happens, the divide between Black and white split further with her wishing she knew how to make it where they can all be people together; A story is relayed about a white rich girl ordering a Black man like “he was her dog” and that she didn’t want to be at a Color’s station all day; Mentions of protests demanding change and The Klan burning crosses on a campus for allowing a Black woman to be entered into a university and riots happening (Autherine Lucy); Gigi wishes she could invite her friend to her apartment, but knows her landlady wouldn’t let her set foot in the door unless she was the help; The Black employees at Wynton’s not being allowed in the parking garage; A woman asks if a Black girl is with Vivien, ignoring the girl completely; The author’s note at the end of the book also has more information about segregation, racism, and “unfair social practices”); A side character had polio as a child and it’s noted that her family lived through “quarantine and shunning” including from other parents fearing that their children will catch the disease from her (The character refers to her affected leg as “dumb” and “weird”; She is also referred to as a “cripple”); Many mentions of brand names & items (Revlon, Estée Lauder, Youth Dew perfume, L’Air du Temps, Chanel No 5, Lady Dior, Baccarat, Evening in Paris, Woodbury, Cashmere Bouquet, Cutex, Helena Rubinstein, Charles of the Ritz, Max Factor, Elizabeth Arden, Dubarry, Shalimar, Monet necklace, Rodier, Traina-Norell, Dior, Givenchy, Charles James, Emeraude, Marc Cross, Chanel, Ann Lowe, Claire McCardell, Jeanne Lanvin, Trifari, Noxema, Pond’s cold cream, Hamilton Beach, Joy dish soap, McCall’s, Maxwell House coffee, Coke, Wonder Bread, Pepto-Bismol, Tums, Formica, Greyhound buses, & Miss Revlon dolls); Mentions of magazines (Brides, Modern Brides, Bride To Be, Vogue, & Good Housekeeping); Mentions of celebrities, public figures, actresses, movies, TV shows, & songs (Mamie Eisenhower, Jackie Kennedy, Rosa Parks, Autherine Lucy, Queen Elizabeth, the Grimm brothers, Audrey Hepburn, Humphrey Bogart, Marilyn Monroe, Elizabeth Taylor, Ginger Rogers, Ann Miller, Grace Kelly, Barbara Stanwyck, John Wayne, Alan Ladd, Fred Astaire, Lassie, Alfred Hitchcock, Elvis Presley, Sabrina, Seven Year Itch, Rear Window, Lady and the Tramp, Meet John Doe, MGM, Warner Brothers, The $64,000 Question, Howdy Doody, The Ed Sullivan Show, ‘Unforgettable’ by Nat King Cole, & ‘Heartbreak Hotel’ by Elvis Presley); Mentions of stores (Sears & Macy’s); Mentions of car brands; A few mentions of a mother being upset about her daughter eloping with a man who “comes from nothing and has no prospects”; A mention of the murders seeming as if they were from a horror movie; A mention of brownnosing.
 
 
Sexual Content- A head kiss; A few touches, embraces, cuddling, & nearness (barely-above-not-detailed); Some noticing & staring (barely-above-not-detailed); Mary Jo and her husband share a bed (nothing sexual happens); Mary Jo’s husband whistles at her & she blushes; Mentions of boyfriends & dates; A couple mentions of kisses & kissing; A couple mentions of seeing married couples kiss; A mention of a kiss-proof lipstick; A mention of a possible affair (implied); 
             *Note: Gigi negatively comments on her appearance and build (pointing out her “flaws” of large feet, pudgy “sausage”-like fingers, and watching her figure; Later she recalls coming home crying when she was twelve because of her classmates calling her a “man-girl” because of her big feet and hands); Mary Jo comments on a type of doll having “grown-up figures” (Miss Revlon dolls); Mentions of women’s figures; A couple mentions of a man who tried to get Audrey and other models to pose for his “sordid” or “tawdry” book covers; A mention of lingerie.
 
-Audrey Penault
-Mary Jo Johnson
-Vivien Sheffield, age 50
-Gigi Woodard, age 35
                                P.O.V. switches between them 
                                          Set in 1956
                                                        304 pages
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My personal Rating- 

I’ll admit two things first in this review: 1. I went into this book a bit concerned because I didn’t personally love the first book and 2. I compared this sequel to the first book nearly the whole time. Perhaps I shouldn’t have done that second one, but I enjoyed this one much more than the first book in the series—especially because of the lack of catty women in it. The women were much better in this story and were an unlikely friend group, but have each other’s backs now. I did think this story was sadder, though, because of the murders of the young brides. Those were hard to read about and I would give a caution to readers who are sensitive to that element. 

 

Just like in the first book, I really liked Audrey the best in this sequel as well. Maybe it’s my marketing degree showing, but I enjoyed the scenes of her, her job, and all the details she has to come up with for the department store the most. Her talent and brilliance at her job is really fascinating and I enjoyed her chapters.

 

I will also say that I say the murder/culprit coming before the half-way point, but as someone who often figures out the killers in suspense books, that isn’t really surprising. It was surprising, however, how long it took the group to figure it out and—like the first book—everything comes together quickly in the final few chapters. After figuring it out for myself, the book dragged a bit to me, but picked back up again once the characters started to figure it out as well. 

 

I appreciated that there was a bit more Christian content in this book compared to the first, though it was still on the very light side. I liked how all the characters seemed to have a faith, but I wish I could instantly confirm they all do. I think certain faith conversations that could have happened didn’t happen due to the main cast of characters being four POV points and there being a lot to cover with their lives, backgrounds, the murders, and other work-related events. 

 

All of this said, I would potentially read another book in this series if there was one—though Mr. Wynton is really going to have to do some serious PR if even more murders happen at or are connected to his store!

 

 

See y’all on Friday with a new review! 




*BFCG may (Read the review to see) recommend this book by this author. It does not mean I recommend all the books by this author.

*I received this book for free from the Publisher (Barbour) for this honest review.

Wednesday, August 20, 2025

"The Women of Wynton's" by Donna Mumma

About this book:

  “Mid-Century Glam Meets Murder Mayhem
     Get swept away to the glamor of a 1950’s department store where four women’s loyalties, vanity, friendship, and detective skills are put to the test.
     Audrey Penault once led a glamorous life as a model but now works as devoted secretary to Mr. Wynton. To her fellow employees, she is too vain and uppity.
     Mary Jo Johnson, a wife and mother, longs to find her worth in the cosmetics department, but it may take a while for the shy housewife to discover her voice.
     Vivien Sheffield owns and runs the bridal salon within Wynton’s. She is proud of her accomplishments and won’t let anyone take them away.
     Gigi Woodard dislikes her job as waitress in the store’s lunchroom, but she is determined not to let her secret shortcomings cause her to lose the position.
     These four women have much to dislike about each other, but they unanimously agree that Mr. Wynton is the best of employers and must be protected at all costs from someone who seems determined to see him gone for good. When other employee deaths occur, can the women band together to solve the murders, or will they discover it is one of their own bent on destroying Wynton’s from within?”


Series: Book #1 in the “Women of Wynton’s Mystery” series. 


Spiritual Content- A couple prayers (including a prayer at a funeral service asking God to hug the departed) & Thanking God; 'H's are capital when referring to God; Partially set around Christmas; Gigi notes she hasn’t been to church in years, but plans to pray for Mr. Wynton’s recovery; A main character says she hopes a man gets what is coming to him (for his actions) and another agrees and says “It’s hard to be Christian in circumstances like these”; Mentions of God & Him forgiving us for our mistakes; Mentions of prayers, praying, thanking God, & blessings over food; Mentions of churches, church going, & ministers; A few mentions of those in the Bible; A mention of Heaven; A mention of a nativity; A mention of a Christmas Eve service; A mention of being Blessed; A mention of needing a miracle; A mention of a couple being “staunch Baptists” and do not drink alcohol; 
             *Note: The phrase “speak of the devil” is cut-off; Other phrases like ‘for Pete’s sake’ and ‘my heavens’ are said once and twice; Mentions of lucky & being lucky; Mentions of Santa Claus & elves; A mention of Father Time; A mention of a woman having a “spell” over a man.
 

Negative Content- Minor cussing including: a ‘biddy’, a ‘blasted’, a ‘drat’, a ‘good golly’, a ‘good grief’, an ‘oh my word’, a ‘stupid’, two ‘dumb’s, two ‘oh my stars’s, and three ‘ever-loving’s;  Mentions of curses (said, not written, including a man cursing at Audrey); Eye rolling; Being shot at, a Fire, & Being arrested (up to semi-detailed); Seeing murdered bodies & blood (barely-above-not-detailed); Going to a funeral service & seeing grief from the family; Gigi gets jealous of the other women for being pretty and getting promotions; Mary Jo tries to encourage her husband through his recovery when he makes negative comments about himself due to missing an arm (he picks a fight with her a couple of times, but she knows it’s because of their situation); Many mentions of murders, how they were done, the murderers, the bodies, blood/bleeding, & murder weapons (stabbing, being hit on the back of the head, & strangled; borderline barely-above-not-detailed // semi-detailed); Many mentions of crimes, criminals, thieves, thefts, stealing, stolen items, robberies, fraud, embezzling, jails, & arrests; Mentions of wars, deaths, battles, fighting, & men not returning the same; Mentions of car accidents, deaths, & injuries; Mentions of deaths & grief (including Vivien for her husband, another woman for her husband, a man for his son, & a boy for his mother); Mentions of deaths, wanting someone dead, attempted murders, poisons/poisoning, an allergic reaction (insect), & passing out; Mentions of Mary Jo’s husband who was in a construction accident and lost his right arm & his negative comments about himself that she hates hearing (including him being in dark moods, thinking he isn’t a man, and him not wanting to do anything); Mentions of a fire, being shot at, & a home being ransacked; Mentions of threats & blackmail; Mentions of injuries, pain, & a diagnosis of someone dying; Mentions of a (grown) son fighting with his father (verbally and physically throwing a chair at his father’s office door); Mentions of a married couple fighting, saying horrible things to each other, & not speaking for days after an intense situation; Mentions of gossip & rumors; Mentions of lies, lying, & liars; Mentions of jealousy; Mentions of divorces (including Gigi who has been divorced twice); Mentions of alcohol, drinking, drunks, & a bar; Mentions of cigars & smoking; A few mentions of a bomb & a couple dying due to their injuries; A few mentions of a woman with cancer being “near the end”; A few mentions of hatred; A couple mentions of a possible burglar & break-in; A couple mentions of military men having nightmares of their time serving (including one ordering amputations in his dreams out loud); A couple mentions of a woman husband hunting for husband number six (she has buried three and divorced two); A mention of the Great Depression; 
             *Note: Audrey recalling two car sales men asking if she needed to talk to her husband before buying a car and then asks how no man has “snatched [her] up” (which grated on her nerves; Audrey calls this “archaic”); A comment about a woman never driving in the city’s Christmas parade before; Others gossip & spread rumors about Audrey (all unflattering, including about her controlling Mr. Wynton, firing people at her whim, & her being a home wrecker); Gigi often compares herself to others & makes negative comments about not belong and on her appearance; Mary Jo often thinks about what her mother would say and compares her life to her mother’s (often implying it’s the gold standard for a housewife); Racial comments and observations are made based on the time-period (such as: A Black man comments on lots of things not being how they should be (which makes Audrey think about that while he served for his country, the same country won’t allow him to use restrooms or drinking from water fountains that say “Whites Only” and can’t even shop in the department store he worked for; Audrey agrees that lots of things need changing); Audrey asks him if he was treated badly during the war, but he clams up on the topic only saying it was no different than how he is treated currently; Gigi noting that one of the cooks she works with can’t join them in the cafeteria, but those complainers who would comment on it will still eat the food she makes; Audrey thinks about how living in Paris opened her eyes to relations between Blacks and Whites, how no one was treated less because of their skin color, & that Blacks want the freedoms that was “already extended to Whites and the foreigners they’d fought [in wars] for”; Audrey tries to get Mr. Wynton to be an example for their city about treating his “colored” employees better, but he says he is too old to go against the rules concerning Coloreds and Whites; Audrey wishes to stand with the Black employees at a funeral but knows it wasn’t done in her city without causing trouble for everyone involved; Gigi hears her boss tell a Colored co-worker that she can easily replace her; The department store has a policy about Black customers having a note from their White employers giving them permission to shop there in their stead (Audrey has tried to campaign against this policy; A Black maid is accused of stealing from her White employer because she’s missing the note); A Black woman who works in the cafeteria is not allowed to drink the sweet tea she makes because it’s poured from the same pitchers that the Whites used in the dining room; One woman talks about Sheriff McCall and his corruption with shooting the young men from Groveland and killing other Colored folks “for all kinds of shady reasons and using the law to make it right”, Harry and Harriette Moore who were bombed and not treated at a hospital due to their skin color, “the Klan” coming after someone, & the woman being upset at being treated like she and others like her are “not even good enough to be second-best”; A man calls a Black man an unflattering name (which is cut-off); A police officer says he can’t confirm something with only “the word of one Colored guard”; A few mentions of a “sundown town” that will haul Black people off to jail for being there as soon as the sun sets); Audrey attended business school at night with other females as the administration thought the women would be too distracting to attend class with men; Mary Jo wishes she could go back to being a housewife and mother rather than work (noting that she would trade all the “sophisticated freedom” to do that, but has to work because of her husband’s injury); A couple mentions of working mothers being told they are “scarring” their children by not being home with them; Many mentions of brand names (Maxwell House coffee, Revlon, Max Factor, Maybelline, Elizabeth Arden, Chanel, Dior, Trifari, Timex, Balenciaga, Givenchy, Chanel No 5, Youth Dew perfume, White Shoulders perfume, Evening in Paris perfume, English Leather cologne, Wonder Bread, Coke, RC Cola, Moon Pie, Ivory, Vicks VapoRub, Tupperware, & Mary Janes); Mentions of celebrities, actresses, movies, TV shows, & songs (Grace Kelly, Elizabeth Taylor, Frank Sinatra, Marlon Brando, James Dean, Bill Haley and His Comets, Queen Elizabeth, Audrey Hepburn, Marilyn Monroe, Cary Grant, Father of the Bride, East of Eden, Bride and Groom, & Lucy); Mentions of car brands; A few mentions of magazines (Modern Brides, Vogue, & Better Homes and Gardens); A mention of Halloween costumes; A mention of Macy’s; A mention of a book (Peter Pan).
 
 
Sexual Content- Two cheek kisses, an ear kiss, a nose kiss, a forehead kiss, an almost kiss, a not-detailed kiss, and three barely-above-not-detailed kisses (most are between a married couple); Some touches, embraces, flutters/shivers, & nearness (barely-above-not-detailed); Blushes; Mary Jo’s husband sees her changing and does a wolf whistle; When Gigi is dancing and kissing her boyfriend, she realizes that thanks to her “two ex-husbands’ worth of experience”, she knows this moment needs a “cooldown” (her boyfriend wiggles his eyebrows with a suggestive comment, but she tells him that he isn’t getting what he wants); A man comments that the store owner knows what he’s doing with Audrey as his secretary and Gigi accuses him of having a mind that lives in the gutter; A few others make suggestions that Audrey and Mr. Wynton were involved and he was her paramour; A woman makes a teasing comment that married men look “miserable”; A man stares at Audrey like she’s a dessert; A ‘baby’; Mentions of boyfriends, dating, dates, & being stood up; A few mentions of kisses & kissing; A few mentions of flirty grins, winks, & blushes; A couple mentions of jealousy; A couple mentions of a rumored/suggested affair (that did not actually happen); A couple mentions of a rumor about a woman dating a man twenty years her senior; A mention of a man being a better playboy than businessman; A mention of men just wanting a beautiful model to be their accessory; A mention of a wife mooning over his husband; A mention of a crush; 
             *Note: Gigi thinks of her figure as “straight and solid, lacking a waistline, with a few well-placed knots so folks knew she was a girl”; A man comments that his wife dislikes him working with young women & complains about him working with too many women at the department store; The same man refers to his wife as “the ball and chain”; Audrey thinks that a man wouldn’t recognize quality if it came and “bit him on his…chair cushion”.
 
-Audrey Penault
-Mary Jo Johnson
-Vivien Sheffield, age 50
-Gigi Woodard, age 35
                                P.O.V. switches between them 
                                          Set in 1955-1956
                                                        304 pages
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Pre Teens- 

New Teens- 

Early High School Teens- 

Older High School Teens- 

My personal Rating- 

I’ve been meaning to read this one since it came out and now since the second book in the series will be releasing soon, it was time to finally read this book that is set at the end-of-the-year. It was neat that it covered fall through the New Year and all the excitement that came from the department store setting. I have learned this year that I like books set in department stores, there’s something about the wonder and class of them that interests me and this book covered that feeling well. 

 

Before starting this book, I was a little leery about keeping track of the four main characters. Thankfully, that ended up not being as big as a concern as I was expecting because they were all very different characters with their own personalities and interests. 

 

That said, Audrey didn’t deserve the hate she got from others. This book really highlighted how gossip and rumors are terrible and how you should never partake in them. Gigi and Cissy made my blood pressure rise every time they appeared. The catty women and people saying awful things about Audrey was partially what made me drop my rating from a 4 star. I was fully on her side and liked her professional, driven attitude. I can’t say I really liked any of the other women (Vivien, Mary Jo, and definitely not Gigi) and I thought they would be more helpful sooner on, but it was mainly Audrey trying to figure things out by herself for the majority of the book. I didn’t really see why she picked them to help (especially because two of them were suspicious of her already) and it felt a little forced to me. 

 

The pacing and timeframe of this book was a little jumpy, which made things moved quickly and I had to keep up with the information shared. The ending felt a little rushed as well, but I think that was mainly because we’re told—rather than shown—a lot of the final results/solution to the mysteries (which I don’t really care for, but there was a lot of characters and details to keep up with so I suppose it made sense). 

 

I almost added that Gigi is dating a bonafide loser to my content notes above, but I suppose that’s a matter of opinion, so I’ll stick that comment here. He was a loser and her self-confidence was so low that made her think it was opposite day and he was a winner. Gigi was already pretty insufferable for the first half of the book because of her attitude and spreading gossip, so I wasn’t a fan of reading her chapters let alone when that louse would appear. 

 

I was expecting more faith content in this book, but there wasn’t much, which was disappointing (and another reason I dropped my rating). I hope the second book will have more Christian elements. 

 

 

See y’all on Friday with a new review! 



*BFCG may (Read the review to see) recommend this book by this author. It does not mean I recommend all the books by this author.